All Comments on 'Jack, The Man Who Was Invisible Ch. 02'

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midwestscribemidwestscribeover 15 years ago
The Game Is Afoot

Can't wait for future chapters. Jack has already become bold and adventurous. He's bound to wind up in a dicey situation...more likely sooner than later. Great writing. Keep it up.

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
nice

another exciting chapter! I can't wait to see where Jack ends up next!

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