All Comments on 'Jade on the Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Well how to a loving couple a swingers.

Good idea!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Not

My kind of fun, not sure why the husband went, I guess he likes sloppy pussy.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
A great little fuck story

I liked the fact that the husband didn't get left out. Just because another guy is fucking her doesn't mean that she should ignore her faithful loving husband. This story allowed the husband to share the sexual excitement that the wife was having, and that is a real turn-on for me. Thanks for the good story....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Weak story

with equally weak writing. There are free editors on literotica... find one, it might help.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Fucking strangers, especially bareback, is for all

purposes attempted suicide. There are STDs, HIV/AIDS, other communicable diseases, them the physical risk, injury, death, and even future blackmail. Nope stupid is as stupid does and this is stupid. Any man that would fuck a woman like this is a risk factor. Any woman that would let a man fuck her like this is a risk factor.

ErotonautErotonautabout 15 years ago
Don't lose heart...

There are some real miserable bastards on this site who can't differentiate between reality and fantasy, hate tales of infidelity and yet continue to read them, and just dump on even quite well-written stories. They probably sit at home alone, sipping beer and spitting each mouthful because it's bitter. Me, I just want to hear what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Well I thought it was a good understated story

I feel a lot of the comments are from people who only read on here for a blow by blow account of sex that they can play to. So they vent their frustration on a story that does not give them that. I cannot account for the sexual paranoia exhibited when reading a story like this that others seem to have.

You should continue - there is even merit in continuing this story if you want to further develop the characters.

impo_60impo_60over 9 years ago
What I didn't like....

What I didn't like was the story being told by the lover...In these cases the lover doesn't have feelings, just being horny and excited to fuck another's man wife...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
cock sucking husband

I love a wife that can let loose and get fucked by a stranger while her husband watches I encourage my wife to fuck other men and when I get to lick her clean that is great.o

creampies4evercreampies4everover 4 years ago
My Kind of Fun

The husband gets to watch his wife fuck a stranger and gets load of pictures for posterity. Then he gets to enjoy his wife's sloppy pussy.

LIDiverLIDiver9 months ago

Very hot but such a tease of an ending!

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