All Comments on 'Jake & Allie Ch. 01'

Can't wait for the next chapter!

A well written story, and I think the Author might be a tease, I am looking forward to seeing the brother actually get his sister, and hopefully get his mother as well. It would make such a sweet story, both sis and mom coming back from a week at the beach with sore pussies,thanks to the work of the young stud.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

intriguing! can't wait for next chapter!

good work buddy .. appreciated .. cannot wait for more ...

First efforts are rarely so good. This is just a little short, so there's definitely going to have to be a Chapter 2. By the way, keep this to Jake and Allie - parent/offspring incest is really not hot.

I liked the story. Pretty hot! Continue, please.

Shame it looks like just a tease. No update since 08.

Glad this writer avoided the usual massive endowments for both his leads.

what's the damn rush? they are only there a few hours and already feeling each other up NO WAY. as said at the begining they haven'y seen each other in four years they would need a few days or weeks to get to know each other again like they used to say in the sixties and seventies SPEED KILLS and you kill this story fast.