All Comments on 'James & Maria Ch. 03'

I like the story though I wanted to slap him when he began to let the twins come on to him and sounded like a teenage boy when he was saying 'well she hasn't shown interest...' I'd like to see him try to move things forward with her and be more honest. I kinda feel like her virginal Catholic girl stuff goes a little too far. I mean she acts like she should go to confession for kissing the guy. It'll be intersting how you get her to accept him for the regular needs of a man let alone accepting he is a vamp. Look forward to more of the story and seeing them get closer. I'd also love to see her become a bit more confident and comfortable in her own skin. Oh and I'm glad you didn't have him calling her Italian princess every other line :)

if and when she becomes a vampire plz show us how she is learning how to control her powers and other stuff like that

Great story! I do hope you continue with your writing its getting even better! I do think you may have a flair for this genre! Anywho i loved it and i cant wait to read the next installments!

Im a huuuuuuuge fan of the non human category on lit and your has got me interested. Am looking forward to reading more of this story. The only negative for me was the whole Jack the Ripper is my cousin thing. Your choice to add it but it kinda ruined the illusion a little bit for me. keep going tho :-D

plz make more chapters

plz make more chapters