All Comments on 'James and Zilpha Ch. 02'

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Anonymousover 6 years ago

my score

is based solely on the writing.1

goducks1 over 6 years ago

i disagree - i like it

the writing is a little rough, but the plot is great, and i like the relationship between the 2. i'm hoping there's a chapter 3

sabra16023 over 6 years ago

Enjoyed

Waiting for chapter 3. Thanks

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I like to write about different fantasies regarding my family and some fantasies regarding specific situations and scenarios. Some stories of mine are based on events that I wished could've ended differently, others are based on actual experiences. Now, I've always wanted to h...

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