All Comments on 'Jameswood Academy: Blake 001'

You knew you would disappoint by your intro. A chapter of just build up on a erotic site is just disappointing. Hope you learn and continue but one star for this one.

You're correct, I knew it would disappoint some readers. I was hoping the intro would cause those readers to wait for the second part before starting the series. Normally I don't write full out series stories with such elaborate characters, but I wanted to try something new.

Sorry you didn't like it, but I hope you like the next part better. Thanks for the feedback.

I fully enjoyed this. I’m looking forward to more and soon ... just my sort of story and with plenty of. Fleshing out so it’s understood. Thankyou

Please write more! This build up was exciting, and I can't wait to read what's next.

Thank you for your comments :-) next chapter should be turned in tomorrow and then assuming it is accepted it should pop up by the end of the weekend.

Ok guys .. I'm not sure I'm going to be able to continue this story here. I'm on the line and my second chapter was rejected because they don't normally publish stories in which the victim is getting no pleasure from the situation.

I'm not sure I'm willing to rewrite that portion so I might have to either 1. Stop. 2. Skip that chapter and move on or 3. Try to rewrite but I'm not sure I can...

It would be a shame for you not to continue. Could you not marry chapter two and three together thereby taking the sting from chapter two. And anyway people will crucify you if it's too rapey rape!

There are other far darker sites if you go there, give people a shout, some people just need to see what happens next.