All Comments on 'Jamie's Wild Adventure Ch. 01'

Ooo, I'm really liking this! Can't wait till the next part!

Plz tell me that your going to finish. I really want to no wat will happen next

on your first story to Lit. You did a nice job a setting up the story. Now that Adam has bitten Jamie let her wild adventure begin. I look forward the the next chapter. I would again like to say congrats on your first story.

yea do continue!! good first story. looking forward to more:)

o please continue. this sounds really interesting!

can't wait for more, great writing also, a lot of 1st stories can be hard to read sometimes so, another 2 thumbs up...

Enjoyed this. Looking forward to more.

Please continue that was an awesome start!! Excited for more!!!

I want moar!!!! Please please? With cherries on top?

Yeah! More is good!

If all your chapters are as short as this first one, you definately need to write at least four more. This way, we can see where you are going. If you are just wanting her to get laid, then you only need one more paragraph.

That is it... more

This is really a great start to the series.....I definately think you have something here and you need to continue the story. Posssibly making the chapters a tad bit longer....Awesome work please keep it up

A little rushed, though. Take your time. It's all about foreplay...