All Comments on 'Jamie's Wild Adventure Ch. 03'

I love this story but IT IS TOO SHORT.

Please post more soon!

but please make your chapter longer :)

To short, could use a lot more detail to the story line itself. But keep up the good work.

In case anyone's interested, I think the next chapter might be a long time coming. Check my bio for updates. Right now I'm working on another story ( there's a summary on my bio of it!) so I think I'll get one chapter of that out before I go back to this one. I appreciate the votes and comments everyone !!!!!

In case anyone is reading this the Author updated her profile and wants us to pick which one she continues first.

I pick this one!!

I want more Adam :D

Please finish this story

Please finish this story!!! Also, I think you could use an editor.