by hesse1
Don't bother with the haters. Look at how many readers you have and know that most of them, like me, really enjoy what you are writing. I love the creativity and my only suggestion would be to give us a little more of what the characters are thinking and feeling during their encounters. Keep up the great work and explore even more interesting corners of the human sexual experience!
I love how hot the stories have been until now, but this one almost feels like a romance story.