All Comments on 'Jane is Trained to Submit Ch. 15'

This has really degenerated into an uninteresting mess.

well written .

engaging & entertaining

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i can see how the story has run away with itself , and has proly taken the Author in many different directions , with good storys of this type/genre/topic it's very easy to keep digging the hole deeper .. and then realise you need a fucking massive Ladder to extract oneself.

also easy to be sidetracked ..

whats the story ?

tale of the dangers inherent in complete mental & physical Submission?

a complex romance ?

a wank fest with a plot ?

a mix of all of the above ?

something else ?

i look foward to the continuation / conclusion of this tale with interest

i would guess it will take another 2 or 3 chapters before we get there ..

possibly as many as 5 or 6 ... depending on how the Author's ideas unfolds.

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every chapter a 5 star vote ..

although the combined story looks to be well over the usual 300 to 400 pages of fiction/fantasy/sex fest novel.

twenty years ago one of the erotic publishers might have been interested in this tale/plot as a 2 or 3 part book deal with a little filling & expansion of the plot..

these days its rare to find such good word craft on a free site , when the work is better than a lot of the content on 99c / $2.99 E book sites

xxxhugsxxx

ty for sharing for free , a story better than many i have paid for

There is another chapter on the way, though I'm concentrating on Teacher Undressed at the moment

good story how a woman get´s trapped and loses her pride, somehow emotional

and how she is changed into a complete submissive slave until someone, BOB is coming to her aid in trying to regain some self respect

I know it has been a couple of years since you wrote the last chapter, but it is a great story and I wish you would do at least one more chapter to bring it to completion. I love all of your stories... You are my favorite author on this site.

The plotline is a bit crazy - but lots of fun to read and from chapter to chapter this story grew on me.

Brilliant erotic fantasy; a bit edgy and far-fetched, but magically so; similar to classic fairy tales.

Thank You