by StoryTeller07
The plotline is a bit crazy - but lots of fun to read and from chapter to chapter this story grew on me.
Brilliant erotic fantasy; a bit edgy and far-fetched, but magically so; similar to classic fairy tales.
Thank You
I know it has been a couple of years since you wrote the last chapter, but it is a great story and I wish you would do at least one more chapter to bring it to completion. I love all of your stories... You are my favorite author on this site.
good story how a woman get´s trapped and loses her pride, somehow emotional
and how she is changed into a complete submissive slave until someone, BOB is coming to her aid in trying to regain some self respect
There is another chapter on the way, though I'm concentrating on Teacher Undressed at the moment
well written .
engaging & entertaining
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i can see how the story has run away with itself , and has proly taken the Author in many different directions , with good storys of this type/genre/topic it's very easy to keep digging the hole deeper .. and then realise you need a fucking massive Ladder to extract oneself.
also easy to be sidetracked ..
whats the story ?
tale of the dangers inherent in complete mental & physical Submission?
a complex romance ?
a wank fest with a plot ?
a mix of all of the above ?
something else ?
i look foward to the continuation / conclusion of this tale with interest
i would guess it will take another 2 or 3 chapters before we get there ..
possibly as many as 5 or 6 ... depending on how the Author's ideas unfolds.
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every chapter a 5 star vote ..
although the combined story looks to be well over the usual 300 to 400 pages of fiction/fantasy/sex fest novel.
twenty years ago one of the erotic publishers might have been interested in this tale/plot as a 2 or 3 part book deal with a little filling & expansion of the plot..
these days its rare to find such good word craft on a free site , when the work is better than a lot of the content on 99c / $2.99 E book sites
xxxhugsxxx
ty for sharing for free , a story better than many i have paid for
This has really degenerated into an uninteresting mess.