All Comments on 'Jane's Leash Pt. 02'

The batteries are dead and everything between her legs is ground meat.

This is lamr

Thank you all for your criticisms, what would you suggest I do to make it better

I loved most of this but at the end, he ended up sounding like a monster! It's not very realistic that he keeps torturing her (the poor woman would be so sensitive she'd be in agony!). Maybe if you'd ended it with him allowing her to cum one more time, it would have been better. Other than that, I thought it was great!

I loved this! I wish you made her cum hard at the end though. I guess I will have to wait for next part!