All Comments on 'Janice and Jason Ch. 06'

well worth the read thanks ....Rich

Swingers are us anybody?

I had not noticed the first five chapters before, so I went back and started reading them before continuing with this one. Your concept and structure is good enough, but did you ever think of using spell check and proof reading before submitting your stories? Your glaring mistakes are so distracting; it takes away from the total impact of the story.

At least it was short.

I have read two of your Stories now, love the characters,almost seem real