All Comments on 'Jason's Story Ch. 03'

I really like this story. I think its hot, thanks. I wonder what will happen next, especially as they try to work together.

Very nice! I was squirming in my seat again thanks to this steamy story. Tangibly hot. Will the adventures continue? I hope so!! More soon!!

Glad it wasn't rape, loved the sex scenes!

I have to agree with the comments a few chapters back. Her name looks eerily close to the "n-word". Was that intentional or do I not know how to pronounce it? If so, then you've completely turned me off... If not, this story is better, but not much. Still not a fan of this man coming into this married woman's house and taking her anonymously. Should be in the "nonconsent" category- b/c those authors also seem to think forced sex is...sexy... and that the woman ultimately turns around to consenting/thinking the sex is "hot."Just my two cents...

***note from the author***

Okay, I didn't respond to the first comment because I figured that if only one out of the 8,000+ people that read it got it wrong, it wasn't that big a deal. But, since it was obviously more than one...time for an english lesson.

The words night, fright, thigh, and high all have one thing in common: a "gh" following a vowel. The "gh" is silent, but usually makes the singular vowel that precedes it a long vowel sound. 'Nigha', which is a lot closer to 'night' than the "n" word (only separated by one letter as opposed to three and which would only be used in one of my stories followed immediately by an ass-kicking!), is pronounced just like 'night', but drop the 't' and add an 'uh' sound.

I really hope that this clears up any possible offense, other than the "perceived non-consensual" portion of my story. Again, thanks for reading and for those that love Jason's Story...stay tuned ;)

DAMN!

Whew Lord...gotta go cool down. This entire chapter was MOLTEN!!!

ANOTHER HOT ONE!!!

Indeed. He does have a strange way of "loving" her, by tricking her. Mind-blowing sex does not a relationship make and after reading your other installments and reading this again, I'm sure this was the foreshadowing of what was the come later.

Aside from his trickery...it's very compelling and you relay sensations and descriptions very well.

The goal was achieved, but what now? A very well thought out and written story with plenty of angst, drama, love and sex. I look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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Ok, you retrieved it