All Comments on 'Jason's Story Ch. 05'

I want her to leave her husband to go with Jason you haven't really talk about her and the husbands relationship so I say she needs to be with Jason even though I don't like cheating its a hot story can't wait till the next part

Jason is going to be devastated when he finds out about the move.

I'm glad you haven't focused on the husband. It makes it easier for me to root for her and Jason, when her husband and kids aren't really real.

Kane and Bria. I would like to read more about their story.

In love with two men, some women have such hard lives....

Easily a 5. There's so much detail about how she looks, what he feels and your dialogue from all the characters flows so naturally. It's a sweet and sour kind of torture.

i've read this story quite a few times, my love. this story is great.

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Sounds like a fun week ahead! Not sure her plans will provide the planned outcome but this should be fun. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.