- Loving Wives
- Jayne Ch. 02
- Page 2
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Click here"She wanted me to leave you alone with her, bloody hell Jason," I spat, repeatedly hammering the lift button in an attempt to get the door shut quicker.
"Jayne I told you we should have said we were married. God I don't fancy her, she's too old for me."
"She is the same fucking age as me!" I growled, as the tears started to fall.
"Oh, but she looks a lot older," he mumbled sheepishly.
- COMMENTS
Clare_Ca_2over 14 years agoLove the style...:) Keep 'em coming. You ought to write a pilot for a TV serial...:)
JADED_ONE1969about 15 years agoNo the normal type of story on this site. Anyway carry on writing.
Simple49erabout 15 years agoOr is the protagonist just plain ignorant and what everybody seems to think she is: a slut in waiting. The behavior of the men in this story is so stereotypically 80's before the present laws in the US that I am beginning to think that the author forgot to mention the date of this story. By and large, the protagonist would solve her problems by being forthright with her husband and both of them quitting to go find better jobs with a more supportive atmosphere for both at separate sites. I know the goal is to create conflict for the protagonist, but this is not believable, unless, again she is just as stupid as she is being portrayed. I think the author can do a better job than this. Or at least make more clear, sooner, what direction this story is really going: cheating wife, a real loving wife, or just a dumb wife.
