by BiDrew42
I liked your other stories, but this is miscategorized. I was not expecting rape, and did not care for this story.
While it did have some rape in it, It is better in the Incest cat.
ALTHOUGH SOME MIGHT NOT HAVE CARED FOR THE RAPE I THOUGHT IT WAS A FUN TWIST. BUT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE STORY YOU REFERRED TO HER AS LYNN? BUT THEN WENT BACK TO LINDA THAT KINDA THREW ME OFF
Physical sssault followed by raping a semi conscious girl. Pathetic end to a decent story