by HeyAll
This is one of the first stories I've made, and I've re-edited it. A nice simple story. I really like it, and I hope you do to!
Heyall
I always enjoy reading your stories and this one is no exception.
Very well written you make the reader feel like they are watching.
Please keep it coming.
Too many writers can't form a sentence with a thesaurus and a computer and they make it seem like we are reading the fantasies of a teen going through puberty.
Thank you.
I am hard from first line to well beyond. Keep going when I see
Your name I open immediately.
OMG, this was so hot, I only wish that my Mother and I could have had an experience like this one. My mother is very beautiful and I often had fantasy's about her. Unfortunately I only had these experiences with my BFF. But we were very open and honest with each other and I told her everything about my sex life. We also were naked in front of each other, and I admired her beauty.
I wish I had a mother to love on me like this. Very well written, and very romantic.
I really enjoyed this and found myself getting quite aroused in my panties. Thank you.
I really loved this story. Not a pulse pounding, orgasmic, cataclysmic happening, just a tender session between a mom and daughfer.
Woah Jim That Was So Hot I Like Most When Nicole's Mom Returned The Favour 5*
This is a professional story with only a few spelling mistakes; but oh my wonderful story!
It's the first story that I had read in this web and I really liked it :D
There were quite a few spelling and punctuation problems, but the story itself was nicely told. Hell, it got me hard. :) Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
No need to figure who will go down first. It's time for them to have their first 69. Highly arousing story. Five stars.
How about a second installment where one of them goes and buys a strap on to use on each other?
I loved this story. I like that a relationship hadn't even really been a thought between either of them. That it just happened and felt right.
That was fantastic. Your writing is great and the story could not have ended any better. Thank you very much.
Love your story my wife and our daughter are in the same kind of relationship. That really brought them closer to each other.
Would love to see subsequent chapters to this story. I loved the storyline and how it progressed.
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