All Comments on 'Jennifer’s Loving Daughter'

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HeyAllHeyAllover 7 years agoAuthor
Author's Note

This is one of the first stories I've made, and I've re-edited it. A nice simple story. I really like it, and I hope you do to!

Heyall

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Felt like a very loving story.

I always enjoy reading your stories and this one is no exception.

Very well written you make the reader feel like they are watching.

Please keep it coming.

Too many writers can't form a sentence with a thesaurus and a computer and they make it seem like we are reading the fantasies of a teen going through puberty.

Thank you.

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
A very yummy story!

And very erotic indeed! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yummy

I'm cumming in my tight pussy right now. This story is so hot

asr3asr3over 7 years ago
So damm HOT

I am hard from first line to well beyond. Keep going when I see

Your name I open immediately.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 7 years ago
Great flow

More daughters should have such a loving mother

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very Erotic

OMG, this was so hot, I only wish that my Mother and I could have had an experience like this one. My mother is very beautiful and I often had fantasy's about her. Unfortunately I only had these experiences with my BFF. But we were very open and honest with each other and I told her everything about my sex life. We also were naked in front of each other, and I admired her beauty.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
lovely

Sweet, natural love

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amazing

I wish I had a mother to love on me like this. Very well written, and very romantic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sensual

I really enjoyed this and found myself getting quite aroused in my panties. Thank you.

blackknight314blackknight314about 7 years ago
Very sensuous.

I really loved this story. Not a pulse pounding, orgasmic, cataclysmic happening, just a tender session between a mom and daughfer.

El_MagnificoEl_Magnificoabout 7 years ago
Hot

Woah Jim That Was So Hot I Like Most When Nicole's Mom Returned The Favour 5*

Darla7000Darla7000almost 7 years ago
So wonderful !

I only wish .....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Exellent

This is a professional story with only a few spelling mistakes; but oh my wonderful story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Thanks!

It's the first story that I had read in this web and I really liked it :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Thank you

You are fucking awesome

kurrginatorXkurrginatorXabout 5 years ago
Great Story

There were quite a few spelling and punctuation problems, but the story itself was nicely told. Hell, it got me hard. :) Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 4 years ago
Mutual

No need to figure who will go down first. It's time for them to have their first 69. Highly arousing story. Five stars.

Clancy31015Clancy31015about 4 years ago

How about a second installment where one of them goes and buys a strap on to use on each other?

FutaRaeFutaRaeover 3 years ago

I loved this story. I like that a relationship hadn't even really been a thought between either of them. That it just happened and felt right.

Only_connectOnly_connectalmost 3 years ago

Not a massively sophisticated story or style, but very nice!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That was fantastic. Your writing is great and the story could not have ended any better. Thank you very much.

KinkynfitKinkynfitover 2 years ago

Very arousing story. Nicely written too! 5 stars!!!

LeeapwLeeapwabout 2 years ago

Love your story my wife and our daughter are in the same kind of relationship. That really brought them closer to each other.

creativeandfuncreativeandfunover 1 year ago

Would love to see subsequent chapters to this story. I loved the storyline and how it progressed.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

It made me cum

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AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

It was very erotic and very well written!!!!!!

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