All Comments on 'Jennifer's Birthday Paddling'

A marvellous introduction to an obvious talent, TakeThosePantiesDown, and worth every one of the five stars I have given it.

It's great to have you aboard - welcome and many thanks; more please ;) !

And a seconded welcome from me

Welcome to the community TakeThosePantiesDown. I look forward to reading your talented writing. Add some good old ass eating with anus sucking and tongue fucking and it would be awesome.

Great story that felt very close to reality. I hope you have more in store for us.

To be beaten and abused. Disgusting story.

I'm new at this, and I have a few typos in my story (and the dialog could use some improvement). Thanks for the kind feedback, and yes - I'm working on a new story!

Great first story! I hope that we can see more of these characters, especially Linda. And as for the person who said that this was disgusting. Surprise. There are people out in the S/M and Spanking world who do enjoy birthday gifts like the one in this story. So you are out of line with you comment.

Assault, battery, sexual assault. He's going to jail for a long, long time. Dumber than a rock.

Great story about loving discipline. Ignore the dolts who will never understand this. Good Job. Whosonfirst

I especially enjoyed your adding Linda to the mix. Now for part 2.

Perhaps the best spanking story I've ever read. I so wish she would write more.