All Comments on 'Jennifer's Birthday Paddling'

by TakeThosePantiesDown

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Tommyg200365Tommyg200365almost 2 years ago

Perhaps the best spanking story I've ever read. I so wish she would write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good one!

I especially enjoyed your adding Linda to the mix. Now for part 2.

RoperTraceRoperTraceover 7 years ago
Damn HOT!

Great story about loving discipline. Ignore the dolts who will never understand this. Good Job. Whosonfirst

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yep sounds like jail to me

Assault, battery, sexual assault. He's going to jail for a long, long time. Dumber than a rock.

Loki_DarksongLoki_Darksongover 10 years ago
Well done!

Great first story! I hope that we can see more of these characters, especially Linda. And as for the person who said that this was disgusting. Surprise. There are people out in the S/M and Spanking world who do enjoy birthday gifts like the one in this story. So you are out of line with you comment.

TakeThosePantiesDownTakeThosePantiesDownover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for The Feedback

I'm new at this, and I have a few typos in my story (and the dialog could use some improvement). Thanks for the kind feedback, and yes - I'm working on a new story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just what you wanted for a present

To be beaten and abused. Disgusting story.

JounarJounarover 10 years ago
5*

Great story that felt very close to reality. I hope you have more in store for us.

SpreadHerCheeksAndFeastSpreadHerCheeksAndFeastover 10 years ago
Hot!

Welcome to the community TakeThosePantiesDown. I look forward to reading your talented writing. Add some good old ass eating with anus sucking and tongue fucking and it would be awesome.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Highly erotic

And a seconded welcome from me

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 10 years ago
Very nice indedd!

A marvellous introduction to an obvious talent, TakeThosePantiesDown, and worth every one of the five stars I have given it.

It's great to have you aboard - welcome and many thanks; more please ;) !

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