All Comments on 'Jenny's Journey Pt. 01'

Great but get an editor. Your punctuation and some spelling are below second grade!

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See grammarist.com/usage/got-gotten/

And it'a certainly idiomatically correct, which is how good stories are written. Incidentally, I'm a retired professional editor.

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You tell us that English spelling and terms are used throughout - and then, on the fourth word of your tale you write, gotten. In proper English gotten should only be used as forgotten.

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