by dbconor
You do a great job of creating pictures in the readers mind. The story had good flow without grammatical errors. I hope Part 2 is in the works.
I love swinger stories - especially told in the first person as yours is. Thanks
Great story and fabulous dinner party. How about dessert with some additional stories entailing Andrea. Nc/reluctant themes would be great with this beauty as Ken owns her now. Delicious and thanks.
I can never work out why people who dislike the 'loving wives' genre bother reading them, and then leave anonymous snide remarks.
But I found it hard to get past wifey starting without any seeming complicity with hub. So I knew were it was going then and that surprised, and disappointed me. Thanks...
You just rushed it to much. It really needed more of a build up. In addition there was just to many cliches.
Just read his last story, and it's written in the same stupid way that this, his first submission is, so sorry he has not improved over time. just another author he likes the woman having sex and the man has no self-respect.
And a man with a ten inch dick just screwed his wife in the ass AND SHURE, she was able to take her husband everywhere the next night. SHURE!
As fantasy - this was fine.
However, if I can be serious for a moment, If I were Dave then I would NOT be pissed that Andrea wanted a night of passion and sex with Ken as long as I knew about it and got to take her home afterwards. What I would be pissed about is that she did not trust me enough to discuss this with me in advance and that I was the only one round the table not knowing what was going on.
So they frequently enjoyed fantasizing about having sex with others BUT...only fantasy!
Now, he is the only one that didn't know the plan for the evening? Can you say betrayal. Wifey is a slut and now had the opportunity to casually allow it to happen and size up hubby's reaction...innocent huh - clever slut.
Now, hubby my friend, you have a hot wife who will from time to time, after fantasizing with you, take a stranger on for a quickie, evening and eventually even a weekend away...she is a hot wife slut and she slowly got you into it...sorry...You lose, She gets lots of strange dick!
Love the idea and how it went down. LW is a great section and I gave you a 5 for a great LW story!!
I guess I'm too old fashioned to think that fantasy is something a couple sees as private. Being set up for a "trade" without having a say in it doesn't seem very exciting - especially when the wife is about ready to cheat (and you find out about it).
Personally after getting my fill, I would have left to start packing. She can fly home on her broom or the other guy's "big cock".
Is this what society has really devolved into? Why don't people in these stories feel it is enough to work within the confines of the fantasy in their heads while remaining faithful in body?
No, don't answer... I know human-kind is failing and there is nothing that can be done. Hell, look at how eager the sheeple are to get a leader like Merkel in for another term...
You can't just spring that on somebody and expect them to go along. I would be pissed. But it was made worse since Andrea schemed with Jen to get her husband involved and that is a marriage breaker.
Well written. Good story. Would have preferred a different ending. I would have liked to Dave have a problem with Andrea not being completely honest with him and taking for granted he would just accept it and join in.