All Comments on 'Jessica'

Great, except for the slight bit at the end with the gayness.

Agreed

but you rushed into the sex with the daughter, then confused the story by going bi. different fetish man.

Story has a major flaw you should really look into. Co-workers over for Monday Night football and the girl on spring break. Should really get the seasons in sync.

... that was seriously weird. Otherwise, five!

I thought all of it was realty hot, especially the bi stuff, gotta mix it up...

As others noted, the suddenly bi boss and the blase acceptance of it by the father blew the ending. Plus the sex was a little short in general.

i thought it was hot. it made me masterbate :) i didn't even notice the spring break and monday night football. i was too busy enjoying myself. the bi stuff through me off a little. it was cool though, just gave me an interesting picture. i would use a little foreshadowing to help the reader know that cary swings both ways. overall amazing. i got to cum twice!

all in all a good story!

You know what? Regardless of the minor season mix up and bi boss, it was a great story. Daughter was hot, sexy and game. The only thing I missed out on was ... Did he get the promotion? Good job.

I wouldnt of changed a thing! I think it's a wonderful story and hope the guys have another get together soon! Gals like Jessica and I can't go long without pleasing as many men as possible!

That was something else. I didn't expect the boss to be bi, but I think it really drew the whole thing together. He was the centerpoint, even with the girl.

I thought this was a great story. Very hot and sexy. I liked that the boss was bi, they all had a good time and no-one mistreated the young woman. Well done.

cheri8

Need more of this girl.

this story touches upon almost all my favorite things. father/daughter, bi, multiple men, group, plzzzz keep writing!

a sequal? soooo good, my favorite, makes me cum every time

iv always wanted to please multiple men, the whole taboo of jessicas father and his coworkers makes it even hotter. i loved that his boss is bi, again, makes it even hotter, i cum to this story every time i read it, multiple times!

Written by an idiot. NO stars

gave it a 5

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This story really got me hot and hard. I love stories about older men getting it on with hot young kids. I just came all over myself.

I loved this story!!!! My pussy is so wet now!

Mmmmmm yeah! FuckEd by daddy plus 3 older men. Made my Pussy super wet and I came hard

If it's spring training, then maybe there would be some football on, somewhere.. some places football is also known as soccer. I'm guessing they know it was the daughter because of family pix at work, or at the house, and if he's not going to say anything about his bosses' bi choices, i'm sure they won't say anything abouut his new incest issue.

I loved the twist.

I loved all of it!!!! We need a follow up story!