All Comments on 'Jetsons Keep A Dark Secret'

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dutch513dutch513over 10 years ago
Good start

I love these kind of stories . You have a good start on this one and I hope you keep going . Stories like this are fun to read ....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Get an editor. The story was good, but I was put off by the spelling and grammar errors.

supervilliansupervillianover 10 years agoAuthor
Author's public cancelation:

Hello Public: I have to regrettably regroup with this story per the policy I'm unable to finish this version i will in turn remake this story at a later date and time. Elroy is underage in cartoon in my story he is 22 i want to comply with Policy. please look for me to add more cartoon stories coming soon... Flintstones, The Simpsons and Naruto.

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