All Comments on 'Jibbilies'

Cool story, but it could use a quick edit. About halfway through, it switches from "Nicole" to "you," i.e. from first person to second person. Then it goes back. It's a bit disconcerting. Other than that it was great. I like the setup too.

There just isn't enough white men with black women stories out there, thank you for this quality story. More please.

So many interracial stories are white woman/black man, but as a black chick who loves white guys it's so fabulous to read an amazingly hot story like this one.

One little thing, though....don't mean to sound like an English 101 prof, but halfway through the story you changed voice from "her" to "you", and then you switched back. It threw me off for a moment - thought for a second I had missed a second hot girl entering the room!

Sizzling grunt sex makes you feel like you're in the room with soaked sheets getting off in stifling heat.

I thoroughly enjoyed it