All Comments on 'Jill's Trip to the Sex Shop'

was excellent. Please write more

The buildup was masterfully done. the actual fucking could have lasted a bit longer for my taste. Jill is a wonder character, don't hesitate to tell us more about her stories.

Anon 1 -- Working on a different one. Hope you like that one better.

Anon 2 and 3 - Thanks very much!! It's nice to know some people appreciated this one--I had fun writing it! :)

The story starts in past tense, then, about halfway through the first page, there's some back-and-forth between past and present before switching to present tense for the rest of the story. Also, since it's Jill's dream, the background info on Jake seems out of place. Wouldn't the dream remain squarely from her point of view?

Loved this story so much

This was very good! I like how Jake dominated & gave her what she needed when SHE didn't know what she needed.