All Comments on 'Jithin Walks in on Us'

Not sure what this as to do with a loveing wife 1 star

The women pundi smells bad,the male arse smells good,jithin should plunder Ravi 's dung hole,not the first in Indian open sexuality

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Look up "slime" in the dictionary and you see this author's picture.

Served fresh .this is the ultimate form of raceism and in my opinion must be centered.

And if he has any sense whatsoever, he'll stay gone.

Outside of English being a familiar, but not primary language, there were too many typographical errors which were NOT fixed by editing ... spell-checker, grammar checker then human review. I liked the opportunistic use of a 'starter TWW' (teeny-weeny wienie' for anal - although a narrow dildo would involve less risk and fuss! I am pretty sure I would have furthered the development of the pre-drilled and double-lubed hole instead of staying with the same-old same-oh at the end (pun intended!)

on this catagory. This is a good story.

Shut your stupid trap asshole. Who elected you spokesman for the comment section. You like this piece of shit, fine, say so, but what on earth makes you think your opinion is the only valid one on this site. You scumbags make me sick with your holy than thou attitude about what others should think.

He'd keep right on going.

the last sentence Jithin was gone - hopefully not to be seen by them again

No wife in the story????

As said before, your opinions, good or bad, make a huge difference to my writing. I love that you've been honest and brutal! In the end it is for you that it's been uploaded on this site.

P.S. Turns out Jithin is a cuckold in real life!! Hence the twist to the story.

Thanks for this mythila. I know you are getting some harsh comments, but I think it is a very sexy story. I, for one, can't wait for more.

A lot of negative comments. Some of them should learn to spell so they don't look so incredibly ignorant. It's interesting in that even though Jithin watches what ravi was doing to his wife, He is the one controlling it. Why she was with ravi, I must have missed that..... especially if the little guy has such a small cock. But ravi does seem to be the perfect one to punish and humiliate as the story has been told so far. I will be watching for more.

4 stars

Hahaha

It's a well known fact all pakis have the smallest cocks

So I guess the large guy must have been nearly 4 inch when fully erect hahaha

Evrey one knows that's why dirty fucking pakis have to fuck there women in the ass so as they can feel any thing at all hahaha

This shold be in the comedy section hahaha

mythila,

I enjoyed reading your hot narrative, and got amazed about negative and racist comments. Sure, they are entitle to their opinion as well, but why so much negativity?

Keep it up and looking forward to your comments on some of my stories.

Kind of a reverse cuckold. Very strange.

ROFLMAO, I seriously hope making me wet myself laughing was your goal. Because that drivel was a side splitter.