All Comments on 'Joan, Ally and Me'

I am sorry your wife passed but I think she would be pleased with your efforts.

I love mother-in-law sex fiction & echo the sentiments of the previous commentor. May your wife rest in peace, & thank you for sharing this threesome fantasy.

That is the definition of true love....where each other works toward the other's fulfillment. Great story.

Really hot and erotic and well written.

Just a hot and erotic scene as mum got a good seeing to, by her son in law and her daughter.

Thanks for the good read.

As a 1st story it was great. Continuing the shipboard romance will be interesting.

Fantasy or fiction or truth (names changed to protect the guilty) a good romp well told.

Thanks

great story well written, had my cock hard from start to finish, please keep up the great work

i loved your wifes stories,sad to hear of her passing but you have certainly have talent too more please

As i was and avid reader of your wifes stories , i was sadened to here of her death my condolences to you and your family , .

I was suprised to see your story Joan ,,Ally, and me , but what a story it was , full of dirty naughty sex just as your late wifes were , in fact reading it today has prompted me to re read some of her past stories again , please keep up the stories , i see there has been nothing from you since 2010 thats a shame as you have the talent to conjour up a good tale , many thx for your efforts i have marked you as one of my favorite authors so will check from time to time to see if there is anything new from you . aall the best Tye