All Comments on 'Jock Play'

For f**ks sake put this sh!t in the right category where it belongs. Gay male shouldn't be here.

Hey nonny, for f**k's sake, the description of the story makes it pretty clear it's gay. ("Not all jocks are straight"? Helloooo?) And besides, First Time can apply to any sexual pairing. F for reading comprehension.

Hot story too, btw

As long as its a first time it belongs here. Just like if its a gay mind-control story, it belongs in mind-control.

Awesome story! Want more! I would like a sexy, sexual love story for these two! Loved it!

Not a bad read but several errors in spelling made it less so. Crotch not crouch and beet not beat.

No matter where the story might belong, it is a good "first time" story as well as a good "gay male" story. Max obviously is taken with Nick from afar so to speak, imagining all sorts of man-to-man activity with him. When the revelation and then the invitation come, Max is ready. Please let these two guys have a second time and a third time and a...

Would have liked to see the senior Nick, already a sexy football star, to have just a bit of chest hair for that masculine and muscular body. The fact that he has a nice pubic bush and great under arm hair, might suggest has a healthy body hair gene. A bit of sexy chest hair would be enough to "push him over the edge" into super-sexiness. Sounds like Nick could be a great catch and even greater lover.

Hope you write another chapter. You are quite good at writing these stories, men4men.

Loved this story looking forward to read more as the friendship develops. I was hard as a rock reading this please continue.

Max had been hit for Nick for years but when given the chance he’s kinda stand-offish. I get being suspicious and careful so as not to be pranked or gaybashed, but when it is clear that Nick is sincere, Max is still kinda hesitant. After sucking his cock, why not take a blowjob from this hot jock. And when asked if there will surely be a next time, why not enthusiastically assure him there will be many more?!

Disappointed there was never a second chapter to this hot beginning.

Part 2, please!😊