All Comments on 'Jody'

Your story has promise, but seem like you rushed it a bit...

Maybe slow down just a little, take a breath, and let your characters develop.

This is not meant to discourage your writing, just to encourage you to take a bit more time.

Get someone to Proof Read and Edits what you scribble down!!

You should have taken more time on the sex with Logan.

Should be rewritten.

Did she lose weight exercising?

Was she on bc pills ever.

Needs work

I'll have a look at suggestions for a rewrite

She was lucky her husband was the forgiving type. The end of the storyline was not conclusive but in a way it was. One can only hope of reconciliation and a happily ever after???