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by rwck1953

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Jim1078Jim1078about 20 years ago
Pretty good !!

Not bad, but some of the wording seemed wrong. Overall, a great story and I hope you continue your writing..

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Great story, it will be interesting to see what develops next Well done. 5 stars

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