by Sabrina0990
Is it just me, or did pages 1 and 2 and half of page 3 get repeated as the last 2 pages? Great story, but it looks like the finish got lost in the shuffle, I was hopping for some underwater sex at the end...oh, well...
Love Johnny Depp and it's a nice story. I love that you show Johnny doing some kinky stuff while still being very sweet.
But when the story ends on page 3, it suddenly begins again. Can this be fixed?