All Comments on 'Joi Fantasy with a Happy Ending'

by Pumpkinhead37

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Why Not

Have hubby get a shower first, maybe a drink to relax, and then tease him as you did in your very short story? She should let him know all is well.

But, your set up, frankly, does not seem like one that would get me fired up. I might wonder what she has in mind for me, and if anyone else is in the house. When she refers to websites, I'd have to wonder if she is angry about that and wants some payback by embarrassing me either then or with photos.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Not very interesting.

1*

chytownchytownalmost 8 years ago
Cute**

Goofy but Cute!!

ProfDavrosProfDavrosalmost 8 years ago
Short fun

A nice different story - brief and fun. Bravo.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 5 years ago
Really?

Tell us how to read it? Wouldn't save it from 1 star.

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