Journey of a Small-Town Woman

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I cupped her breasts tightly and pushed my cock deep into her pussy and she then took over and placing her hands on my chest, started riding me tight and nicely. She then bent down a little and I sucked and bit her nipples, while my hands caressed her lovely tushy and her pussy tightened around my cock.

There was sweat on her face, her long hair was falling on her side and her eyes had a hungry look. Within minutes, I heard her moaning and she arched her head back, dug her nails into my chest, tightened her whole body, and started cumming. But that didn't make her stop and she continued riding me until I came inside her very wet pussy, then she lay down on me, resting her face on my shoulder and holding my head in her arms.

She remained in that position for at least five minutes, then she lifted her face, looked me in the eyes, and said: "Was it good?"

"Yes, it was," I said kissing her bare shoulders.

"It had been a very long time, so got carried away. Next time, I won't rush it and will let you enjoy it."

"I really enjoyed it. Don't worry. We had a great time," I said as I caressed her back and cupped her breasts.

"You like them?" she asked looking at my hands cupping her boobs.

"Of course. Who doesn't?"

"That's true. First, it was boys who wanted them, then men, and now my son."

"I want everything, not just them," I said, slapping her naked ass.

"You will get whatever you want, promise you. I just want you to be happy."

"I'm happy, Mom. Wait. Be right back."

I went to the kitchen, lit two cigarettes, took out a bottle of wine, went back to my room, handed her cigarettes and bottle, and carried her in my arms out of the hut and to the beach.

She put her leg over my thigh, her arms around my back, closed her eyes, and buried her face into my chest, while I caressed her lovely back and her long, red hair... our naked bodies wrapped around each other like lovers.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice story gave it a 3 there was way to much information and not enough sex you should have continued with more sex and them moving and involve her sister and daughter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Details, details! Which camera were they using, which length, which settings?

eroticstorylover2020eroticstorylover2020about 3 years ago

Long build up ‘which was good’ but rushed the finish?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I would give more than 5 whether it was possible!

But why abusing son for so long?

He must has a marble balls!

timlaudertimlauderabout 9 years ago
???

It got to be too much. Mom is a pure slut and the son no better. I prefer a story with good people gone bad but not turn into trash. NO LOVE.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Who Desired What

Nice story but way to many first times. There seemed to be a quickness to the sexual ending; why?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
A, An & The

Great story!!

When you read it out loud, like I do when I write, you will realize that you don't use articles correctly. Find an online source to help you if necessary.

Nice, hot story - could only read better with proper grammar!

Schuppinzigh@aol.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Could have been better if......

Except for the previously mentioned underuse of the word "the", the main thing that detracted from an otherwise good story was repetition.

In describing the photography sessions, the story would have flowed much better if, instead of, for example, 'I took a photo of...', 'In the second photo she had...', 'In the third photo.....', etc. you had simply said something like, "I took a series of shots from different angles, at first with legs crossed demurely, and becoming progressively bolder, until finally I had the one I wanted - her breasts cupped in her palms, and her legs apart, proudly displaying her excitingly smooth pussy."

DeepLoverDeepLoverover 11 years ago
One of my favorite stories

I love the progression and build-up, instead of just having the short encounters of finding either partner naked or having thoughts about them. You made a good story out of a trip and the setting you made for it is amazing. You got great stories happenstance, don't stop making them!

happenstancehappenstancealmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Anonymous - Thank you for reading the story and taking the time to write to me. Happy that you liked the story. Appreciate your comments.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Beautiful story..

enjoyed your story, especially the slow build up between mother and son. it showed the respect they had for each other's feelings. loved it

happenstancehappenstancealmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you

ricksouza - Thank you reading the story and for taking the time to write to me. Appreciate it. Glad that you enjoyed it. Will try and expand it and include Aunt Sophie and her daughter. Thanks a lot.

Anonymous - I'm sorry that you didn't like the story. No, 'the' isn't a pattern, but somehow it became in this story. Will rectify it soon. As far the depiction of Croatian beaches is concerned, I might have taken some literary liberty :)

Sad to see that you have given the story just two stars.

Anonymous - Happy to see that you liked the story. A lot of time and energy goes into writing a story, and it's always good to hear that some readers liked it. You, and others, are right: Need to improve the grammar and flow of the story. Will try and write better stories.

Again, appreciate everybody's feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I really liked the story, I enjoyed the slowish build, laying story line down rather than only straight sex. . .

That being said, not to be offensive at all but, It did take me away from the story a bit trying to read past the obvious language barrier, please, try to work grammer into your next story more, to be able to create a solid atmosphere, that is my only critisism.

Again, thank you so much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Is English your second language?

I am honestly asking for you seem to have something against use the word "the" before words where it's appropriate. It's very common with people that have English as their second language.

Not familiar with your other stories to see if it's a pattern but if it is, all I can recommend is getting an editor. Also, while I appreciate build-up as much as the next person, your build-up was more of "finally, this author is getting to the point of the story." A good build up is one of sexual build-up and I didn't feel that was here in this story.

Also, I am fully blooded Croatian and been there myself and when I was there on the nudist beaches, believe me even as a horny teenager that would fuck just about anything that could walk and had a pussy, there was NOTHING on those beaches that would get me hard. It's everything you don't fantasize but is what's really out there: unfortunately.

2 stars.

ricksouzaricksouzaalmost 12 years ago
Nice

I really enjoyed your story, and I, too, am looking forward to Aunt Sophie and her daughter joining in the fun. I didn't mind the slow build up, but their new openness was very stimulating. I am going to go back and look at your other entries. Are you Croatian? Male or Female? I was a voter registration supervisor in Bosnia in 1997. I never got to the seaside in Croatia. Rick

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