All Comments on 'Journey Onward Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent story with plenty of opportunity to spread or move many directions.

Well written, plausible character(s) that fit the environment well and this could go for many, many chapters with this pace & quality!

BRAVO!!

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