All Comments on 'Journey to a White Hot Night Pt. 01'

That was just plain bad. Enough said.

Do Go On . . .

Liked the beginning, but was too short. Anxious to read the next chapter

Some very well written erotica that leaves this now aroused lady needing to know what happens next. Looking forward to reading how Jan, her hubby, and James finish their evening together. More please.

Looking forward to Part 2

L

To short to know where this is going...3* for now

Arousal is not necessarily legitimate; appetites should not always be satisfied. If there is no sacrifice of selfish base desires, there is no respect, nor true love. A very cheap and shallow marriage, very well illustrated. Thanks for reminding us how stupid and self-destructive people can be.

Foolish cuck husband and willing whore wife.