All Comments on 'Joy, Pain, and All Between Ch. 04'

This girl reminds of a Katt Williams stand up when he was talking about crazy baby mamas. I like the story, don't be afraid to slow it down just a bit. Even though I don't like the female character, your development of the characters is pretty good, despite how rushed the story seems. Looking forward to the next chapter.

wow wow wow, more please with sugar and what ever the hell else you want on it to get more of this story.

I want more more more and soon please!

that was hot!

Please don't let her be pregnant, I'm just saying. Other than that I can't wait for the next chapter. Great chapter.

I don't want her to be pregnant either. But I would like to also so thank you...thank you...thank you for updating. I needed my Skyler and Joel fix. lol. Great story as always. Can't wait for the next chapter...so chop chop.

That was excellent. I hope Skylar doesn't regret her night of passion. I look forward to the rest of the story.

Thank you so much for the update but Lord let her be on the birth control or something. That would suck if she got preggers. But I love how the story is progressing. Can't wait for the next update.

..please please please...NO BABIES!!

I like the latest installment of Joel and Skylar. Personally, I find Skylar to be an interesting character because she isn't a typical leading lady, because she is crude, unrefined, and a bit rough around the edges which is good even though she got a bit slutty at the end. Hopefully, she is not peggers but in life things happen and this one she nor Joel can't blame on the alcohol. Joel is hot, however, he needs to be humble because he comes off as bit of an asshole. Nice updates and hope you continue the story

Very well done! I hope there will be more.

Wet dream material. :-)

really liked it

umm, i think so far so good. although, i wish i knew more about both skyler and joel; like what their studying and joels, history with girls.

It's still a little confusing. I like the plot and all, but I think you should have developed your characters a little bit more. And when they go to seal the deal, draw it out. Or if it's a wham bam thank you ma'am, give it huge gusto and the trademarks of damaged goods. Otherwise, kudos to you.

I though that they would have had a few more sessions and or dates, then a nice kiss,,,then sex. Definitely did not see this coming.

awesome, awesome

This was so hot is a pity is only a mini series!!

I thought she was a virgin. How was he able to slam into her and she feel no pain, let alone the tightness that should have been there.

Holy crap! Where can I find a Joel???