All Comments on 'Juanita'

The story is really well-written and developed, it embraces the reader into the (un-)reality of the situation, dipping him/her into the silent lust of the moment and the deepness of the sensations - GREAT!

Does not illustrated mean more than words. Wrong category.

The photograph was attached within the text, for some reason it didn't appear with the story.

enjoyed story or fragment, a little too much Raymond Chandler mixed in but acceptable, nice detailing, emotion and sex act well done, sometimes the word order in descriptions seemed unorthodox or reversed but perhaps a stylistic devise. My only complaint is that that is a photo of my girlfriend, well not really. A little editing and it is publishable. you have real talent!

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