All Comments on 'Judy's Tan'

What a great final paragraph!

One thing that sets this story apart from many others is the fine grammar. If a story has poor grammar, I'll never make it to the end.

I am sure that all Literotica readers are waiting for more of your stories!

Well written with the little twist at the end. Good read, nice flow.

ending. It seems that all three got what they wanted. Hope hubby gets to fuck that great ass in the morning.

Very good story. Don't let Judy's tan fade. Do have her get some more cum, I mean sun soon. Thanks.

Judy's Tan was my first post. I uploaded it without using the volunteer editors because I wanted to hear what the readers have to say. I will take all comments into consideration for future stories. I will also try to use less quotation marks.

Thank you all,

Richard aka Hyperthread

Thanks for following rules and using quotation marks correctly. In many of the stories here I have to read the dialog several times to determine who said what and where the spoken word ended. Although I am not a fan of wimp husbands, you told your story well. Keep writing, you have talent. Ttom

Too bad that he didn't get to watch while Jimmy stretched her out. Well written, and hope that you would write some more on this little sweet horny slut.Thanks .....Rich

So you can write this story, cause I can't think of another reason. Not my thing, but you don't know till you read it. I'll skip the rest, guys sluting their wives out is not a turn on for me, neither is swinging.

Glad, we read the comments first.

...the "boy" next door with the bigger cock tells hubby wife wanted to make it about cheating?Dumb,and real world is correct,though it makes me think twice to say it.Pistolpackinpete

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Richard is a cuck, Judy is a whore, and Jimmy is a son of a bitch.

... good technical analysis, but beside the point.

Hyperthread, very well written good flow, a little to fast paced for my taste, but you sure know how to write an exiting story...