All Comments on 'Jugs Ch. 07'

by CABONE

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Just simply a special series

I just re-read the first 6 parts and this last one.....well, just simply icing on an amazing cake. You have a gift, a truely special talent.

Don't ever lose it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
the best...............the best.

wow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

hat was the BEST story I have ever read. Please keep the good work

lonwritr06lonwritr06about 13 years ago
Damm

Wow, look this series has been 1 if not the best story I have read. I luved how u used both sides of the plate so to speak. Iam plannin writin thanx to ur story. Hope it comes close to urs.

lev1astanalev1astanaalmost 13 years ago

Absolutely amazing. Great storyline, it flowed perfectly.

OldKingClancyOldKingClancyalmost 13 years ago

There are stories that you read because they're hot as hell and there are stories that you read because they give you a warm feeling in your stomach because you can sense the romance of the characters. This is the latter. Brilliant.

KingC509KingC509over 11 years ago
Megan's confrontation

Enjoyed the entire story but was left wondering what happened between Megan and Colin when she went home after her weekend with the family. It's obvious they are still together but.......Seeing how you had Becca's little story of her and Vi's week at the lake, thought it only natural to throw that into the mix.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
CONGRATULATONS!!!!

Hey, it's the best story that i've read up to now, (I've read quite a few in about 1 1/2 years). Keep it up, and excellent story, and characters. Keep up the good work and good stories. SIMPLY WOW!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Thank you, I really enjoyed this little romp

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I'm surprised at you

You have a unique ability to spin a tale, and quite frankly I'm jealous of. That said, in most of your stories, it's the story that counts not the sex. This was not written like that. It was more of a 70s porno sex with no story, I was disappointed. But please don't stop writing, you're a good writer

CABONECABONEover 6 years agoAuthor
To anononymous

I appreciate your comment. If you'll note the dates on the submissions you'll see that this series was my first attempt at writing. Sometimes, it takes a while to find your voice...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Brilliant!

Simply WOW!

Knowing now that this was your first submission, it is by far the most impressive first time submission I've come across! The whole story had a warmth and romance to it and the character development of the main characters was pretty good!

Keep up the good writing!

josenussbaumjosenussbaumabout 2 years ago

I still hate the cheating of Mom on Dad which looks like an OK guy. Ruined everything for me.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[19.12.22]

Sexcellente Series!

Great character development, just the right amount of drama, and of course a good amount of love and sex.

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This was incredible. I hope you write more, I'm hooked on your writing and will be looking for more stories from you

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