All Comments on 'Julia's birthday'

All fathers and daughters should experience such love

A great start to what I hope leads to many more stories.

My only suggestion would be take your time in building up the story

You could have described her salon and buying experience more and what she was thinking. Also more descriptive in their love making. I think a little of you excitement showed through was this personal

Great job. I hope this is the start of many more to come.

So tender and sweet... lovely indeed!