All Comments on 'Julie and Danny Ch. 03'

OMG please please please have the next chapter ready to come out right away! loving the story , ty / bill

Waiting for the next chapter.

I like this series. I hope you continue this one.

this was very jumpy and did not mesh well with the end of chapter two. this was rushed and did not flow properly it reads like a first draft that needs A LOT OF EDITING this is not in postable condition. you should delete the series and rewrite it properly and use a good editor before posting it again.

but you need to finish it.

at this point dan and julie are no better than John, the guy they dislike so strongly because of his infidelities. no, they are actually worse, because of their hypocrisy.

I'm really fed up with all the unfinished stories on here...............

......it would have been better had you finished it !

Another disappointingly unfinished story, one of far too many on here, sadly.

Rapier

I agree with Rapier875, why even bother writing a story if your not going to finish it. This story was just getting good and

then nothing. I guess since it has been over 7 years since this was published the author either quit writing or died and it unfortunately will never get finished.

No point in finishing it, the author already ruined it when he decided to go into the group thing, in an otherwise hot incest story. No doubt the author lost interest, as did most of the readers.

Why the hell do I read these stories that go no where

No damn ending why am I not surprised