All Comments on 'July 4th 2013 Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Some bad word choices.

'even barrowed a message table' ... on a wheelbarrow,

'wearing swim suite' ... to mach the lounge suite

'treatment out hear also' ... for the deaf

'a glass of lemon aide' ... a yellow assistant

'spend some time grouping him' ... for the group photo.

All these are valid words, will never be picked up by any spellchecker.

They are just the Wrong Words for the sentence. I was thinking that maybe you might want to work on your voice recognition software.

But then after the half-way mark was reached, it all became perfect.

you wore swimsuits, and husband had a waist (not the expected 'waste')

After tripping over the first half words, was a pretty good tale,

Cheers and Thanks,

Kilroy

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I liked it

There is SO much wife sharing on this site that it is refreshing to read about husband sharing for a change. Thank you. It is indeed possible for a woman to enjoy sharing her husband, and I wish there was more of this on literotica.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
July 4th, 2019

Please eat some fireworks, and then a match.

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