All Comments on 'Just a Jab Ch. 04'

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grabmyballsgrabmyballsabout 8 years ago
Rereading and Enjoying

Such a lovely story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
When does Janet get involved?

I can see this twist coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I COULD SEE

...that the previous chapters were setting the stage for the following chapters with women for John -- just as the very first commenter on chapter 3 foresaw so well and described so well in his terse but very astute analysis.

What I did not see at all was the incursion of the cuckquean element -- a pleasant surprise.

I am a fan of cuckquean stories, but only when well-written, with assent (eager is better) and with respect toward the wife/cuckquean (no humiliation, side-lining, nor neglect) -- in other words, like this story.

This is a major attractive feature of this story: husband John and wife Linda are each careful to do nothing to impinge on the rights or the feelings of the other. John exhibits the utmost care and concern that Linda is assured of his love, wanting only what will enhance, rather than detract from, their marriage and relationship. Linda is concerned that John gets every needed "treatment," and is solicitous to even arrange for ladies for him

-- and then getting delight (and getting off) from it.

(Inconsistently, I do not have an appreciation for willing cuckold stories.)

So far, this series is shaping up to be one of the better cuckquean stories of Literotica.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Paul in Oklahoma

PS. I'm also pleased at the absence of anal.

AccelarVesterAccelarVester5 months ago

Very erotic chapter.

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I want to write more stories floating in my head, hoping they are shorter. Had 3+ years but cancer is back and treatment is starting. Hopefully this time can be rid of it. 11 Sep 20. Trying to get back to writing. It's slow going, as after 8 weeks of daily radiation treatment ...