All Comments on 'Just A Roomate?'

Good sex, love the ending, its so cute. Good job on your first story.

What's a roomate?

Is that a roo mate

or a room ate?

Or maybe you mean roommate (room mate)

Great first submission. I hope to read more from you.

For a first story.

Hot, erotic and sweet.

Well done.

that was a good story. that is what happens to most people who are just friends. it's a lot more realistic and believable than some of the other stories here. good work.

I do like your writing style! It is refreshing to see so much reality and realism in your story. Most of the writing here is way over the top and out of touch with reality!

I enjoyed it immensly and for your first story..Outstanding!

I look forward to seeimg more from you!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

I agree with the other comments. This story is very realistic and believable. I liked it.

That was sweet :)

it was pretty good. i liked that he wanted her secretly too. :-)

more please