All Comments on 'Just Another Story'

Just got thru reading this with my straight as an arrow younger brother and we were both laughing most of the way thru. Very creative.

Yeah. It's great. You are great. More.

I wish I had ever thought of doing that. It's almost like those Hope and Crosby road movies where the actors stop in the middle of the movie and talk to the audience. Only I have to say this is much wittier. Well done and a good story. Keep it up.

I like how you broke the 4th wall. It's an interesting technique that I don't see often. Very well done, especially in light of "the narrator's" first language not being English. Well done!

Thank you so God damn much, if it weren't for me reading this, I would have never noticed the smell of my plastic clothes hamper heating up against the radiator, which would have evidently caused a fire, possibly killing me, my dad, my grandma and her dog, and for that I thank you.