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Click hereHe started to pump in faster and faster so I knew he was close. Oh, how I longed to be filled with his warm cum. My mouth watered at such thoughts, promising myself yet another treat after this. He groaned in utter satisfaction, a low growl of triumph as he emptied his seeds inside me, overflowing my waiting womb. Breathless, I lay my head onto his as he lowered me down, his knot still deep inside me.
"You are definitely my little wolfy vixen, love," he breathed out raggedly. I chuckled as he took me to our bedchamber, laying me down to our bed. We snuggled close to one another, his front side to mine as he was still buried deep within me. "I love you so much," he whispered, and then his tone became serious, "I'll protect you, I won't let Jerry lay a hand on you, love," he vowed but I just giggled once again. I was too much in bliss to even care about something so insignificant like Jerry.
How about a second round? I thought to him naughtily as I pushed him to his back, quite easy to do seeing he was still inside me, hard and loving. He grinned with anticipation as I rode him, my hands clawed to his chest but he didn't even complain as his hands tugged and fondled at my swaying breasts. We continued to make love throughout the late night, insatiable with one another.
I shook to myself, starting to blush at the memory. I hoped my Betas didn't smell the heated arousal inside of me that would be so embarrassing. A random thought about Jerry flew into my mind, I sighed. I really want this to be over. I had enough troubles already to last me a few millennia.
We just hoped blindly that he would take bait and decided to launch his insane plan on our Grand Feast this weekend. In the next few days, the three packs would arrive and during the nights, all of us would gather and howl to the moon.
"I'm excited about the Grand Feast, Gracielle," Jessica piped in after a few minutes of silence, "I know that the alpha and you didn't have the traditional mating ceremony and all but I'm glad that you guys agreed to throw a feast! I love dressing up!" I couldn't help but to smile at her words, remembering how my mother was a devout on dressing up. I was her Barbie Doll and will always be.
Tylie giggled. "I think I'll flirt with some of the Nyca wolves on that day," she turned and twirled, "I'll tease them and make them embarrass themselves with raging hard-on!"
"Naughty Tylie!" Jessica chuckled, "Watch out! If they lost their wolf over you, you're dead meat," she giggled, wondering at the same time when she will find her true mate.
"You guys are supposed to be little innocent virgins!" I shook my head in disbelieve at them, but amused at the same time, "You will be the death of those poor boys," I exclaimed, laughing, remembering well how I had unknowingly teased James, making him losing control over his wolf and claimed me, right under the moonlight.
My first time was amazingly although unorthodoxly perfect.
We could taste the salty air just a few meters away. I smiled. I could hardly wait to run my legs in the cool salty sea. It was then a hit of vertigo washed over me as Jessica and Tylie broke into a run and raced with each other. I wanted to join them but the banging in my head slowed me down. The world spun in front of me as I staggered backward. I lost my footing on a stray tree root, losing my perfect balance; the darkness swallowed me whole as my body fell limped on the ground...
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Jayleen88about 15 years agoAuthorYes, I only have an editor for the next chapters... I know that I made grammar mistakes here and there but like I said before lol, I tend to miss out mistakes (English isn't my first language so please be understanding with me) To the rest...thank you so much for all the sweet nice comments and compliments and to comment entry of Anonymous in USA from 9 March - THANK YOU for those sweet words... I must say, I didn't expect to receive more comments after the series have finished... I mean, I haven't logged in to check for such a long time I think, because of my revision...lol...TO ALL OF YOU - THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for all the wonderful constructive comments and sweet compliments!!! Really appreciate them!
Anonymousabout 15 years agoHave you noticed that some of the posts that complain cynically about your alleged editorial inaccuracies nevertheless contain blatant errors themselves? Talk about pots calling kettles black; they, perhaps, should hold their letters to the type of uncompromising scrutiny to which they hold yours -- maybe then they wouldn’t sound so haughty and authoritarian!
(Bottom line: you are one terrific writer ... and you know it!)
Anonymousabout 15 years agoI just wanted to say that I can't get enough of this story. I can't wait to read the ending. But I also wanted to say that I don't mind the errors. The important part is the plot and how well you keep someone interested. I believe your story is one of the best I have read, and I thank you for that.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoYour stories are not superficial, but lack editing. This has been said before and therefore should be a major issue in your writing. The story is wide in scope but lacks depth. Additional characters and what they are doing; how they are feeling, as you did in this last chapter were inspiring for those seeking not only erotica but some story with "teeth". Keep writing that will improve with practice. Getting an editor as you refine this must be an essential and priority goal for you. As you can see by my rating I loved your stories. I only commented on this one after reading the others. Keep up the work.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoI do enjoy your story, but your lack of editing is atrocious. Why don't you start with the basics. Here, I'll help. You should use past tense when describing things and present when your characters are speaking. Past tense ends in -ed usually. When you use dialogue this is how it goes. "I was waiting eagerly for you." <--notice how it ends in a period, not a comma. As opposed to, "Here I am," she called out. <-- notice how that ended in a comma, but only because there was more text that followed. There are other ones, but start with these. I would get an editor if I were you, to elevate your stories to the next level. There are some word choices/wrong words that an editor could help fix. I really do enjoy your story and you definitely have potential, but at the end of each chapter I thought, 'Man, I really wish she would edit this or get an editor.'
