All Comments on 'Just Eight Miles Ahead, He Said Ch. 03'

by cindylynn34

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owneroffewwordsowneroffewwordsover 6 years ago

Long time coming... I enjoyed it a lot. Hope Beth gets the Love and Pecker she DESERVES.. Cindy too.

countercockwisecountercockwiseover 6 years ago

Fucking HOT! She will make Beth a full Lesbian in no time... J/K Good job cindylynn34

nafsnaxetnafsnaxetover 6 years ago

Not much sex... I am liking the breeding aspect.

Mixedmind16Mixedmind16over 6 years ago

Seems Leon is going to be giving Beth a baby. I was very happy get to read this new chapter. I had pretty much given up on this Author. Thank you for the story.

I am guessing asaic = as soon as I can.

eatyourverbschildeatyourverbschildover 6 years ago

Really loved it. looking forward to more.

feedingtheratsfeedingtheratsover 6 years ago

It's about time. Was sure she lost interest or abandoned her account. Loved it. Keep going.

myperiodisbetterthanyoursmyperiodisbetterthanyoursover 6 years ago

Wow... I didn't see it heading to this mess. It's plenty kinky for sure. Maybe nuttsville instead.

niceandsoftniceandsoftover 6 years ago

Love it so far. The E.D. black dick might be really fun to keep reading about.

margandmackmargandmackover 6 years ago

its hurried some what. but we are both desiring to read more.

pasadenakidpasadenakidover 6 years ago

Beth is off a little in this chap. cursing too much, confessing to mom she wants Donald, but telling him he wont get it. hope I get surprises and answers in the rest of the story.

I enjoyed the use of listening to songs to make Beth feel extra moody. Mo Town is perfect for doing just that. so many great stories in those song lyrics back then.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Need an editor

Why can't anyone get this right.

Verb, Current tense: drag

Verb, Past tense: dragged.

Noun: drug - a pharmaceutical product.

swollenup7by7swollenup7by7over 6 years ago

I dragged cindylynn34 back to grammar class, imploring the teacher to show her a thing or twenty..

sober71sober71over 6 years ago
It gets 5*s from me

Just loving this story, looking forward to the next part, you got me hooked.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

White women should get knocked up by black men to help others have babies. The fact a mother and daughter will be pregnant at the same time makes it all the more enjoyable, and it means they can have as much black cock as they want when their bellies start to show.

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