by Mjolnir
I really loved this story. You write very well, and the use of your words is very elegant. I am a little disappointed however, that it has been nearly 7 years and you have not written the sequel. It says to be continued, but has yet to be. I am sure I speak for everyone else when I say, I can't wait for the continuation and hope you get to it soon. Great story.
Please continue with this story. It was so hot to read and imagine. Mark should pop Darlenes' cherry and marry both girls. Then, perhapse, have both girls get pregnant?