by Mjolnir
Please continue with this story. It was so hot to read and imagine. Mark should pop Darlenes' cherry and marry both girls. Then, perhapse, have both girls get pregnant?
I really loved this story. You write very well, and the use of your words is very elegant. I am a little disappointed however, that it has been nearly 7 years and you have not written the sequel. It says to be continued, but has yet to be. I am sure I speak for everyone else when I say, I can't wait for the continuation and hope you get to it soon. Great story.